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Copyright protected on May 2009.

The persons, places, entities, and events depicted in this story are fictitious.  Any similarity to actual persons, places, entities, or events is unintentional and purely coincidental. 

Warning!  Some stories may contain adult language, explicate violence, adult situations, and some sexual content.  These stories are intended for a mature audience. 

One Shots #4

Written by Stacy James Meadows

With Concepts Created by Stacy James Meadows, Larry William Van Hoorebeke, and Donald Edward Van Hoorebeke.

Editor’s Notes: This was a comparison essay I did for my college English class.  I will probably never really use this particular concept in any storylines, but I wrote it starring some of our super heroes, and thought readers might enjoy it.  It’s pretty short, only 4 paragraphs. 

The New Model XL253 Car.

 I, Mr. Sentence, Head Director of P.T.I., am writing this to you Electrical Phantom to inform you of the similarities and differences between the new model XL253 car and the old model XL200 car.  I think you will find that the new car has all the standard equipment the old one has, and a few things that the old one did not have that will help you out even more in combat situations.
 Both the old and new car models have a variety of weapons, including machine guns, oil slicks, smoke screens, special armored plating, and miniature missile launchers.  Both the old and new car models have computers, theft protection, communication devices, and tracking devices.  Lastly, both the old and new car models have comfortable interiors that seat five comfortably, and travel at high speeds on the road.  This is about all the car models have in common though, as you hopefully will be surprised to see.
 The new car model has several features that the old car model does not have.  The new car model has a variety of energy weapons, that were not even thought of in the design of the older car model.  The new car model also goes a whole lot faster than the old car model, and even has the capability to travel under or over water, and short trips of flight.  Instead of a keyboard computer in the dash board of the car that the old car model has, the new model has a voice-activated computer, and displays are on the windshield, so the driver’s eyes are more on the road then if looking down at a screen.  There is also a variety of new communication features, laser targeting for the weapons, and even a navigational computer that will be able to guide you from anywhere in the world to anywhere else in the world.  The last major differences between what the old model car and the new model car are that the new model car can even drive itself, and with the remote control communicator can follow complex directions to be anywhere you need it to be while you are somewhere else.  With our newest technological advances and major breakthroughs, we were able to make giant leaps in the new design for the model XL253 cars.
 Even though there are similarities between the old model XL200 car and the new XL253 model car, you can tell the major differences between the two.  We, here at P.T.I., hope that you approve of the changes, and want us to continue producing the new model XL253 cars on the production line, and to discontinue manufacturing the old model XL200 cars.  I personally think you will enjoy the improvements immensely, and will want all of your personnel to have one.  Despite the new models being a little more expensive to produce, the new added benefits to the designs actually make them more cost effective to make than the older models.  So you can personally test one out for yourself, one of the new model XL253 cars are being shipped to you personally, and will be arriving in a few short days.  I hope you enjoy it as much as we here at P.T.I. do.

Next One Shots #5 Duty Status Report.  An informative essay I wrote for a college English class describing the different duty status operations for the team.

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